You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what course you are studying
• what things you are not happy about
• what you expect from the school director.
Dear Sir/ madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know the problem faced at the night course in the school. Although, the course on a whole is interesting, certain section of it, like group discussions or any activities to be performed in groups are unorganized, there is no proper instructions given to the students, and most often it ends without conclusion.
As you may know there is only one course that is scheduled for night in this semester, which is politics. Politics is an optional subject, so the foot count usually is less and moreover it’s a night course which is makes it even more unpopular among the students. However, as Economics is my major subject, I believe economics and politics go hand in hand, and in general I am interested in world politics.
As briefly mentioned above, it is the group activity that is of concern, if there is a standardized procedure or a resource book with step by step instructions to conduct the activities in a group, and clarity on allocation of grades of such part of the course.
It would be commendable, if required action is taken to address the issue, and encourage students to participate in night course.
Thank you.
Yours Faithfully,
Roopa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, may, moreover, so, in general, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92822966507 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85750503809 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3093467969 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213529835983 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102443548684 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107172201946 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911777214234 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06262059983 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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