You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager.
In your letter, you should:
• describe the tour
• tell what you liked about the tour guide
• recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour guide
Dear John,
I am back at my place and have already joined work too. I am writing you with lot of cherishable memories that were made during those four days holiday.
Living in a concrete jungle, working for twelve hours a day had drained all the energy in me and this break at the island has totally rejuvenated me. The white sandy beach, palm trees across the shore, underwater life and calmness of the mighty waves has added life back to my soul.
Not to forget the guide, Michael, though a young boy, he was supremely knowledgeable and had great sense of humour. It was never a dull day when he was around, all the four days spent would go down in my ‘best days’. He knew everything about the island, its history, the best food joints, local shopping, name it he knew it. He was our one stop person for almost everything. I am still in touch with him and have recommended him to my friends who want to spend their holiday in the island.
Nevertheless, as a happy customer, ask you to motivate Michael by sharing my thoughts with him and rest of the team. Finally thank you for organizing the trip so well.
With Regards
Yours faithfully
Roopa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...thoughts with him and rest of the team. Finally thank you for organizing the trip so we...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63981042654 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43622179988 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7943124735 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770097731877 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314237928912 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324114760272 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050841351271 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388752074051 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.