You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
Say which edition and when did the article appear
Explain why you lost contact with your friend
Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Sorena, one of your newspaper members from 2014. I read a very interesting article in your yesterday morning, 23/08/2019, newspaper. It caught my eyes as I saw the picture of my childhood friend on the front page under the title of “A man from Newsphere.”. Therefore, I am writing to seek your help for seeing my friend with whom I lost my connections around 12 years ago.
14 Years ago, my friend and I were neighbors and we became friends. We played every day together after school. His father got a job in Arizona in 2007 and they moved away. Since that time I had no contact with him and I missed him.
I hope you can help me to establish contact with him again. For this, I give my cell phone number to you. Please, kindly give them to him as I know the confidentiality does not let you share his contacts with me. My cell phone number is 12746378.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as you gave him my contact information.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58602150538 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69103073805 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3150549885 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269635014916 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874653313821 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062833965431 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147532758886 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469941684004 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.