Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
-give advice on how you and your friends and family use the centre. -explain why the centre is important for the local community
-describe the possible effects on local people of the centre closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to the government's decision about shutting down the sports and leisure centre of our community.
It is the place where my family and I have been spending most of the free time of ours to get health benefits by playing various kinds of sports. Apart from that, my children like to learn swimming lesson in the pool.
Not only this centre has brought laurels to the city because if is its amenities, but also it is affordable to most people as it is subsided by the local council. Moreover, it is used to remain healthy, to be sociable, to make new friends by the populations.
Naturally, demolishing the centre would be a great loss to the local civics as its facilities the people to practise various sports skills. Further, it attracts the youngsters' interest to maintain a healthy lifestyle, otherwise, they could start abusing drugs. Last but not least, it is the best pass time for the elders by spending time with others.
I hope you will notice the aforementioned factors before making a final decision.
Yours faithfully,
Dheeraj Goyal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to the governments decision about shutting...
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Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to swim'.
Suggestion: to swim
...rt from that, my children like to learn swimming lesson in the pool. Not only this ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63687481985 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5585269428 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172791075069 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055764711712 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517521649761 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709156093684 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486710660994 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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