poverty
Nowadays one of the most challenging hot issues which has been recently been under the media spot light is poverty.There are lots of opinions about the different reasons of being wealthy or poverty.As far as we know human being stated with many different problems.Human rights has mostly ignored by governments and it led to fundamental problems like poverty.In opposite side there are small groups of people who do not care anything. Moreover they even use poor people to achieve their goals.In my idea, there are many reasons which can make poverty and poor people; First, governments .Secondly, oppression of people. Thirdly, poor knowledge.
Poverty is the world that can bring many negative energies to everyone.During last century, by improving technology and also quality of peopleʼs life, shining of poverty has been considerable more.One of impediment reasons to make poverty for people is our governments.It is very essential issue and of course it needs lots of time to discuss about it. Governments has constantly obtain different rules which have negative influences in weak generation of society.For instance, by looking to aggregate amounts of taxes during a one year we can understand more than 70 percentage of taxes have been paid by weak groups of people in a society.An instance which was mentioned above show very clear thing that the high amounts of pressure in a commercialized society are on poor level of people.
Being cruelty has gradually increased in our societies. People with low connections and also weak ability has always been bothered by higher level of people.They could not get their rights because there was no person to support them.There a lots of examples to prove this idea.for instance,By looking to jails and criminals we can get results most of the people who committed a crime was innocence and they just put on the jails because of lack of attitude , knowledge and also supporting.
The last reasons which has not attractive been for government is poor knowledge. People by poor amounts of education and low-level of family have widely suffered of this issue.One of the serious idea is that they do not know how to find their abilities.Lack of knowledge and any motivation can lead to poverty as far as we know.For example. More than 90 percentage of arrested people in jails who committed crimes are under middle education .The prior reason show significant importance of education.
At the end, I strongly believe that governments plays a critical role to make poverty in a society and the second basic reason is our people who can make unbalance level of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09534883721 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84505659651 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518604651163 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.801135394 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.181818182 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0909090909 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146235933681 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644499361735 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970793223223 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964701627363 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652299204403 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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