There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
From ancient times to the present. Music always play a vital role in our life. Why is it such influential? And what kind of music are the more important? The traditional music or the international music. This essay will discuss and provide appropriate evidence.
There are several reasons why music is in dispensable in our lives. Firstly, it opens the window of our soul, making us love life more, turning enemies into friends and war into peace. Jazz music is a prime example, it is rooted by black slaves, who must be labor miserably on strange lands far from their homeland, and they’ve composed this genre to dispel the hardships in life. Secondly, music has a magical capacity to connect people, irrespective of their age, people will hold hands to sing their favorite song
Additionally, I am convinced that both of folk music and foreign music bring equally valuable. To explain, traditional music stores the culture value that the previous generation had created, therefore it tremendous impact on citizens' musical tastes as well as their perception in conserving and developing this music. In contrast, International music brings a new wave, helping people expand their understanding and experience of multinational culture
In conclusion, people need music for its undeniable perks in nurturing the soul. For these aforementioned reasons, I believe traditional and international music should co-exist to gain the most out of this wonderful creation of note and rhythm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27731092437 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91745536295 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651260504202 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1127238876 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411513870482 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17228782247 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15360797021 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269769514866 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916864491089 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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