Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits outweigh the problems?
Nowadays students are keen to move abroad for their higher studies and many people are advocating it as a way to mitigate their country’s outstanding problems. I am agreeing on it at an extent but it sometimes creates new challenges for country itself. I am going to analyze both aspects in below essay.
First and foremost, developing countries where higher education system is not as good as it is in developed nations. Students always prefer to move out to other country where they can get international standard of education. There are my countries who are sponsoring these students’ fees in order to get their youth educate at par level so that they can contribute in development of their country. Although these schemes put additional cost on national budget but eventually country will benefit. For example, Several Asian countries sponsor scholarship for abroad higher education in medical field so that they can get doctors who can help in countries healthcare field and pass their knowledge to others.
However, it is evident that many of such students who arrives in other countries for higher education get settled in same country after completion of their studies. This results in the benefit that is supposed for their native country is directly pass on to other country. Such type of scenario is also termed as brain drain. In such cases countries losses their talent as well as money.
In conclusion, I strongly believe in there is no harm in sending students outside to country for better education but at the same time, sponsoring country should also make sure these students must serve their own country for a time period or whole life. That is how, country problems can be out weighted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... country's outstanding problems. I am agreeing on it at an extent but it sometimes cre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03496503497 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69159921656 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0792392666 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219717421502 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845729075043 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497558366195 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150567473588 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110044627191 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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