Nowadays, celebrities increasingly have the status of role models, in particular for younger people.
Do you see this as a positive or negative development.
With the development of show business, popularity and influence here has increased. Because of this reason, many people set their example for themselves and others.
On the one hand, there are many popular people who had a difficult childhood; they suffered from a lack of means of living. Looking at such stars, teenagers will understand that no obstacles should stop you. In this way, popular people can motivate and inspire people. Also, a lot of celebrities do charity work, in turn, this will teach teens to be kind and think about others.
On the other hand with everyday reports of celebrities divorces, break-ups, extra marital affairs, it seems that they themselves never apply the values that they preach us via their interviews in fashion and lifestyles magazines. Which means that their lifestyles advises 90% fake and it worth avoiding reading the holy lessons they give. They have actually ruined the holy concept of marriage.
In conclusion, I suppose that celebrities can be good role models, but it is important to choose right person as role model.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of means'.
Suggestion: a lack of means
...difficult childhood; they suffered from a lack of means of living. Looking at such stars, teena...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...e models, but it is important to choose right person as role model.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so, i suppose, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09659090909 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57350614615 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1194227469 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138857943662 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512095604305 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459133994458 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082537165285 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413936330298 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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