A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either to go on vacation or to buy a car. Your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your friend’s two chances and explain which one you think tour friend should choose. Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
I guess, it is a difficult question, and my friend have to decide himself, which one is better. But I could try to help him through exploring the sides of this problem.
Firstly, to have a car gives a lot of advantages in common life. Firstly, with a car we become more mobility. We do not need to plane a route through public transport, and it is good for the people, who does not like a public transport. In addition, car ownership gives us a part of time, so we can go out earlier.
Secondly, it is a great opportunity to have both of chances. I hope, that my friend will be able to get a vacation a little bit later and then he like a car owner can take a vacation on his car. It will be cheaper and after vacation he will have both offers of his choice. In addition, future vacations can be also cheaper for him.
However, it can be situations, when a person needs good vacation and does not have to see only the material sides. When something has gone wrong in our life, we need to relax, that so as not to go crazy.
So I would recommend him to have a car. Personally, I think to have a car has more advantages today and in future he could save his money thank to this buy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
... good for the people, who does not like a public transport. In addition, car ownership gives us a ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...friend will be able to get a vacation a little bit later and then he like a car owner can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, i guess, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15086206897 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40308199232 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530172413793 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9493752356 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7857142857 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118520847588 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411231245162 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419246447307 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665097731592 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287151835473 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 10.9000537634 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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