Some people think it is better to travel by car in the city. Others, however, think that travelling by bicycle is better. Discuss Both views and give your own opinion. Give an example
Some community argue that it is better to commute by cars. While, other group of layman supports travelling by bicycle within city. However, both sides has its own pros and cons. Hence, before commenting on my opine both the scenarios are discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
On the one hand, discussing the former view the positive sides of use of cars in the city. Firstly, it is a time saving. Nowadays, human works day and night to live a luxurious life and due to this they do not have enough time. Thus, they prefer car over a bicycle. Moreover, many people understands it is a social status to have a car and in the recent time people believe in show off to show they have lots of money. Many people have to travel more in cities to do their daily job, for the instance, marketing employees has to travel here and there to advertise their products to the local public as well as to the vendors. In this case it is better to use car otherwise they will suffer with tiredness in the middle of the day. However, there are demerits too like pollution increase day by day by using cars, for example in Delhi the air is polluted that it is hard to breath. Moreover, cars are expensive, it is not affordable to everyone. Last but not the least, accidents are increasing due to cars and heavy traffic, consequently , more number of human dies in accidents rather than natural death.
On the other hand, bicycle riding is a fun, healthy, environment friendly and economically too. To begin with bicycles are cheaper so common man can afford easily. Moreover, the biggest advantage of use of bicycle is people becomes healthy and no need to spent extra time for daily exercise, consequently, people becomes fit and healthy. Furthermore, bicycle is environment friendly. Nowadays, air are so polluted that it is hard to find a place in city without a polluted aire. More use of bicycle will decrease pollution gradually. What is more, less accidents as bicycle speed is limited while cars can go much faster, consequently more chances of accidents.According to one surveyor if you run five kilometers bicycle per day than you will not have to consult a doctor anymore.
To conclude above discussion, according to my opinion it is better to ride a bicycle within the city. It saves environment, money, health which are definitely required to live a healthy and wealthy life. Thus, bicycles outweigh cars use in the city
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76959619952 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6623357209 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522565320665 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9081145339 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5416666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45833333333 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220159740037 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604670475844 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464164319693 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147544678171 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567366403027 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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