Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Many visitors likes to explore new places where they can enjoy different experience. Nowadays, maximum number of visitors are travelling the locations where situations are stiff such as the Sahara desert or Antarctic. However, there are many merits and demerits for the travellers who tour at these types of locations. Therefore, both the aspects are discussed in ensuing paragraphs with explanations and examples.
To commence with, the positive side of the statement, firstly, many traveller likes to challenge themselves to survive in critical surroundings where they have to make efforts to live. They want to experience the extreme worst conditions where foods, water and shelter to sleep in night are not easily available. Moreover, by doing these kind of tours successfully many gets fame, name and money, consequently get satisfied when they see their names on the pages of broad sheet or even on internet, for the instance, to climb a Mount Everest it is a big thing to do and gets identification. Furthermore, many wants to isolate them from the daily hurdles of life and have some peace in their life. What is more, one can explore beauty of nature and can inhale pure air as they do not find fresh air in their town due to lot of industrial and vehicular pollutions.
On the contrary, discussing the downside, first of all these types of places are isolated from the city, so it is hard to find the medical service in emergencies and even communication facilities also nil, for the instance, while exploring the different conditions it is possible to degrade health or have some unfortunate accidents so will be hard to find medical services, Furthermore, foods and water are not easily available. Also, atmosphere can change at any instance of time and many times human body not able to adjust the condition promptly. Moreover, at these kind of locations natural calamity can occur any time and largest damage can happen even one has to lost life too, for the instance in news we heard that during mountain climbing due to heavy snow storm or due to landscape tourist lost their life.
To sum up above discussion, it is good to explore places where layman can learn to survive where extreme worst conditions has to face. However, it is advisable to go with proper planning and preparation to fight against it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'like'.
Suggestion: like
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...st the condition promptly. Moreover, at these kind of locations natural calamity can occur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, kind of, such as, first of all, on the contrary, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96428571429 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71117667574 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558673469388 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9357140141 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140560266416 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466327083893 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420483630531 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889129136905 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340066434066 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.