some expert believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Essay topics:

some expert believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In the present age learning new language has become a controversial issue and ask for the best time to start it. some group assert that student should learn foreign language at primary school, whereas many other argue they the best period is secondary school. Personally I am favor of the firs view.

To start with, learning a new language at primary school has become a growing trend in many countries in the world. Learning new language at this age brings them some advantages. children who are at primary school are more prone to learn new language, due to their enthusiasm to learn new knowledge. Second reason which make learning language much acceptable for this age are facilities which are provided for them at school and make it easy to learn new language. Lastly, learning new language at primary school lead children to communicate with their foreign classmates who their mother language is difference from each other.

In contrast, some other may claim that primary school is too early for children to start learning new language. they contend that in this age, learning another language beside their mother one make them confused. And maybe they have problems in learning their mother language. Finally, they do not suggest, learn new language at primary school.

As a conclusion, I would concede that although learning language at secondary school has own advantages, it is too late to establish the pleasure of learning new language for children. overall, I convinced that primary school is the best age to learning foreign language.

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Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, lastly, may, second, so, thus, whereas, in contrast, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.109375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53538194777 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46484375 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0046158785 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375162615046 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176059003785 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875749841681 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288227672368 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297967394694 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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