A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
• say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
• explain how to apply for the job
Hi Mike,
Hope all is well at your end. After I received your request for a job in my country a week ago, I immediately started searching for a suitable job in the local job portals and among my connections. You know what, I finally found a job opening for you. This is with a Global Multinational Company called Oracle and position is for the role of Data scientist.
I am sure this role suits you most as you completed master’s in data science and moreover you are looking for a challenging position in Data analytics. This role offers you a good package, accommodation near office and provides free lunch to their employees. I addition to that, this company has multicultural work environment where at least people from 10 countries will work, would just suits you.
You can go through the Oracle careers website and upload your resume under the job code 1102 DS. I can assist you on the job application and hope we will meet you in my country.
Best of luck and hope to hear from you soon.
Warm Wishes,
Harsha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, moreover, so, well, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71195652174 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66208389988 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5314254426 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392608205161 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142406203764 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839301991974 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230410361008 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839496062632 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.