With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Technology has progressed very rapidly over the years.Modern technology has changed our way many things in our lives.This essay will discuss the main advantages and disadvantages of this trend. Technology has a profound effect on our culture, values, beliefs and lifestyles. In my opinion, this is not necessary change such as the advantages of technology that helped the society to change fast and for the better.Our everyday lives have been made more convenient by scientific and technological inventions such as trains,airplanes and computers.The advantages of technologies are impacted to a young children, moreover,educational purposes too.As opposed, it might effect on natural phenomena, as a result harmful superstitions have disappeared.To conclude, modern technology has definitely made our life self confident with its amenities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89344262295 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64130983695 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713114754098 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.197704835 49.4020404114 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.666666667 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.6666666667 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776988473827 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528204718891 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045268426448 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776988473827 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.77 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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