You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe your plans for the party • invite your neighbour to come
Dear Jan,
I am writing a letter to invite you to join us for a party to celebrate an important occasion on Sunday 25th, 2019.
I would like to start with my introduction here, its Ali, a resident of house number 18 A-Block which is located opposite to your villa on the right side of the corner street. I bought this house in your gated vicinity a month ago and have recently been shifted over here from another town; therefore, we have a plan to arrange a party to celebrate the housewarming ceremony. It’s an important occasion for all of us because we did struggle a lot to earn a hefty amount to buy our own house after 15 years.
In this regard, we would like you to invite to join us for the celebration along with family members. The party will start at 6 o clock over the weekend; hence it won’t interrupt your office routine. In addition, we will be arranging a dinner with a wide variety of cuisines including Indian, Pakistani and Arabic, play area for kids, and a musical band to enjoy the traditional songs. Although the volume of the songs would be at a nominal level, we are afraid that it might bother you with late-night noises, so apologies for that.
I look forward to meeting you soon and get to know in detail.
Yours sincerely.
Ali
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| 2019-12-18 | sohailahmad | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on the right side of the corner street. I bought this house in your gated vicinit...
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Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'joining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'invite' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: joining
...his regard, we would like you to invite to join us for the celebration along with famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57327586207 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47960992267 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633620689655 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8289884728 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222888276857 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994714830632 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802825270663 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113310613421 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408894778583 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.