Advantages and disadvantages of using facebook

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le='vertical-align: inherit;'> , công nghệ thông tin phát triển nhanh ch...
^^
Line 5, column 1149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le='vertical-align: inherit;'> , chúng ta có thể kết nối với bạn bè và c...
^^
Line 5, column 1277, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rất
... dùng dễ dàng làm quen với nhiều người. rất có thể là rằng nó là một ứng dụng miễn ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...ụng miễn phí giúp bạn chat conveniently.Another, ảnh hưởng thuận lợi kết nối
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1963, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...án, kinh doanh trực tuyến rất effective.As một kết quả ^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...'vertical-align: inherit;'> Mặc dù tất cả các giá trị đã được đề
^^^
Line 9, column 1163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le='vertical-align: inherit;'> , Facebook góp phần tạo ra con người muốn...
^^
Line 9, column 1466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...;'> nổi tiếng và thu hút attention.Another bất lợi ảnh hưởng của việc sử dụng
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 2099, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ạo lực kết quả trên mạng là hơn intense.Moreover, Facebook có một số hạn chế mà mọi ngườ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chính bạn. ^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 0.0 41.998997996 0% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7248.0 1615.20841683 449% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 569.0 315.596192385 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.7381370826 5.12529762239 249% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.0443237165 2.80592935109 358% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430579964851 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1481.4 506.74238477 292% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.60771543086 162% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 709.262545201 49.4020404114 1436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 805.333333333 106.682146367 755% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.2222222222 20.7667163134 304% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00778684035058 0.244688304435 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00703425251866 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00668251767909 0.0667982634062 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00508174620185 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00505513122751 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 70.2 13.0946893788 536% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -77.07 50.2224549098 -153% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 29.9 7.44779559118 401% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.7 11.3001002004 351% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 57.5 12.4159519038 463% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 49.5 9.78957915832 506% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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