you want to learn a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer about
What the course is?
How it will benefit to the company?
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to inform you about a cookery course that I want to join. I am working in your company as an assistant chef.
Yesterday I read an advertisement from a daily newspaper about cooking classes which are offered by a renowned college with little money and the duration of the lesson is only 6 months. Timing of the classes is flexible so it will not affect my work schedule. In this course, they provide information about various recipes and hybrid dishes.
I want to enrol in the classes because of it not only boost my skills but also aid the company to add more types of cuisines. They give up to date formulae and also provide a certificate to the learners, so we can add more dishes to our menu. I also told my other colleagues to join this course so our company will get skilful workers and become prominent among others.
Hope you will accept my idea.
yours faithfully
Emily
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-22 | Jyoti_dhillon | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-22 | Jyoti_dhillon | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... Hope you will accept my idea. yours faithfully Emily
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l accept my idea. yours faithfully Emily
^^^^
Line 23, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my idea. yours faithfully Emily
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63473053892 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43857450796 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0978768099 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222541435773 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931691836559 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777918587347 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14046191801 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116043032002 0.0580467560999 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.