You recently ordered something online and had issues in online delivery. When the order came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – – explain what you ordered and what were the things missing. – explain the importance of this delivery. – ask for a replacement.
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to convey my disappointment with your online store to deliver incomplete gadgets accessories.
Please be informed that I did place an order to buy a brand new Lenovo i7 laptop via using your online store because one of the friends told me to buy electronic items from a reliable store like yours which I did. However, I got astonished when I did open my parcel that the laptop is being delivered without a battery. I just couldn’t able to understand the negligence of a well-known store to deliver incomplete orders to their customers. I would like to put into your kind consideration that it’s a really important device for me because I am due to travel to France for a business trip to attend a recruitment fair. Therefore, I should have a personal laptop to keep track of the recruitment matrix, so I would be able to share the outcome of the trip with the senior management to decide upcoming actions. However, because of the incomplete accessories of my gadget, it won’t help me to perform the above-mentioned tasks which are the prime motive to give order via your store.
I would request you to please ask your delivery staff to take it back and replace it with the fresh piece by Friday, so I would be able to install a window before my departure to France for a recruitment drive.
I look forward to hearing a positive reply soon.
Best Regards,
Alx
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to convey my disap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.752 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84646025793 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6474665639 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125592475866 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451137136321 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413265099744 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700064174034 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052678390577 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.