Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Gone are the days, when age for marriage was considered to be 14 to 18 years. However, now a days people get married and enjoy parenthood in the age of mid thirties or later. In my perception, this trend will provide many benefits to the society, which I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, getting married in 30s is beneficial because in this stage a couple can get well educated and they settle their business hence, they can maintain funds to bring up their child and manage their own expenses. In the era of inflation, a significant amount of income is necessary to manage the cost of family. Consequently, Availability of proper funds, avoid extra pressure on community and nation. As an instance, if a person will remain unmarried up to an age of 30 or more, he can complete his education and settle his career independently, which will help him in his later life. It not only helps him with the rear of the family but also boosts the economy of the nation.
Furthermore,A mature parent is needed to hear a child because it is the major responsibility of them to make their child a good citizen of the society as well as the nation. In addition to it, a study in a journal menopause examined Older mother's life expectancy and wheels that the woman who wait for later motherhood are likely to live 95 or more years of their life. Hence, later parenting is proved to be reason for longevity of mother's life.
To conclude, I pen down saying that later parenthood is beneficial for both society and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65693430657 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68832225792 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3273504255 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202135243492 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623309355963 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568837969565 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114704754555 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602447781893 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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