Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
The innovation always bring a new possibility to people. In the beginning, we use carefully it but then cannot imagine our life without new devices as computer or cellphone. In my opinion, it is an important and helpful to have a computer and use it every day this makes life easier and enjoyable. I believe so far for two reasons, which I am going to explore in this essay in the following passages.
The main reason is tendency of becoming easier for getting some information which people need just by click twice or three times. If you want to read a new book or buy new magazine or even watch some movie you can buy it online and get electronical version, additionally you can order home delivery, so you do not have to spend time going to the bookshop or cinema. My personal experience is valid example of this. I prefer buy some electronic books on internet, because it is faster than to go to shop and it's more convenient to use it, so I don't need to take a heavy book I just download it on laptop which always with me. In addition, I have access to copies of movies by subscribing on media-service provider.
Another reason is option of connections with people around the world. In nowadays, people can call to their relatives and friends who are far away. Moreover, connection became more personal and more informative starting from using video calls. For example, it possible to show the accommodation and quality of food to your mother when you study abroad. In my experience, I have done a vied call to my mother to show the place where I have stayed in France during my internship.
The last reason is using personal computer force people to get education and improve some personal or language skills even being at home. It became more popular getting online classes or online courses because it save your time as you don't spend it for way to place where are you study. This is really important and my personal experience is approve it. As engineer student is important to me learn programing and computer sciences from the newest resources, besides this major is changing and develops fast. Thus, I took an online course from "Prometheus" platform; it is ukrainian analog of "Coursera" or "edX".
The personal computer makes people life easier, funnier and helps improve themselves. We have access to all information in world and can connect with people aroung the world. The personal computer united people and change their life by giving chances to learning new subjects being at home.
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- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? 76
- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'absorbing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: absorbing
...l was complicated, but more encouraging to absorb knowledge, information and students exp...
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Line 3, column 859, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...econd year of study as the top 10% among other 120 students in my course. I start...
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Line 3, column 894, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...among other 120 students in my course. I started to be more fascinated as my exc...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , measure
...rn how to search the relevant literature,measure the parameters, analyze the data and pr...
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Line 7, column 989, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'progressed'.
Suggestion: progressed
...egative result of some theories is also progress, as I can cross it out of my list. Duri...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...order between two fields and subfields. I desire to continue doing research in so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, third, thus, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 10.4138276553 336% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 24.0651302605 370% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 125.0 41.998997996 298% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4384.0 1615.20841683 271% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 825.0 315.596192385 261% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31393939394 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.35936686864 4.20363070211 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19124468004 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 413.0 176.041082164 235% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.500606060606 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1365.3 506.74238477 269% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 35.0 5.43587174349 644% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7884908443 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.486486486 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2972972973 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18918918919 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 8.67935871743 311% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822546744147 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225467269416 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322773629277 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485384110177 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377820845842 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 254.0 78.4519038076 324% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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