Your friend is visiting your town. Write a letter to give him/her some suggestions on places to visit and where to find cheap accommodations.
In your letter, you should:
• When the best time to visit your town is
• Where the interesting places to visit are
• Where to find cheap accommodation
Dear Saurabh,
Hope you are doing fine. I received your letter last week, and I am glad that you have finally decided to visit my town – Mumbai. Mumbai is a great a town reflecting the Indian culture and values but at the same time is modern. Personally, I am sure that you will have a fantastic time and will create a lot of fun memories that you will cherish for lifetime.
I understand that you planning to visit Mumbai in December, which is perfect as the weather will not be too harsh. In terms of places to visit, there are tons of tourist places to visit however, I would like to recommend few must historic places that shouldn’t miss like Gateway of India - an architectural marvel constructed by British, Colaba Causeway – shopping hub for antiques and Jehangir Art Gallery – showcasing all modern art and paintings.
Many tourists have a notion that accommodation in Mumbai is expensive, which isn’t true. There are many hotels in Mumbai that are affordable and comfortable for stay. I would recommend few hotels like Hotel Fariyas, Hotel Gordon House and Hotel Grand. These hotels are centrally located thus making travelling easy and convenient.
Please share your flight ticket details, I would be happy to receive you at the airport. Give my regards to your parents.
Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92825112108 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63232396644 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0279097145 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224741267242 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756723365822 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824074277764 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131127905878 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764722045579 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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