A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for invitation,
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him/her about other times to visit
Dear Alice,
How are you? I'm glad to receive your letter last night and thanks a lot for inviting me over. spending some time with you and visiting your town could certainly make my winter holiday interesting. However, I would not be able to visit you this month.
my parents are coming down to see me end of this week and they will stay until next month. they have already booked the flight. So, I am afraid I won't be able to leave the house anytime soon! they were waiting to spend the Christmas vacation with me for a long time.
I am really sorry that I am putting you down. When can I visit you, if not this month? I am available after the New Year's Eve and would be happy to visit you over during any weekends.
I caught a cold due to the weather change, other than that everything else is going great! I hope to hear from you soon.
Cheers,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alice, How are you? Im glad to receive your let...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Alice, How are you? Im glad to receive your letter last night ...
^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spending
... and thanks a lot for inviting me over. spending some time with you and visiting your to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... be able to visit you this month. my parents are coming down to see me end o...
^^
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ek and they will stay until next month. they have already booked the flight. So, I a...
^^^^
Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e able to leave the house anytime soon! they were waiting to spend the Christmas vac...
^^^^
Line 17, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an that everything else is going great! I hope to hear from you soon. Cheer...
^
Line 21, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ope to hear from you soon. Cheers, Shahla
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3696969697 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04674482312 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2140952985 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5454545455 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206618212025 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730297724787 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530905399839 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118060354001 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890659527475 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.82 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.