Sports and games create disturbance in students'life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies.To what extend do you agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in sports and games create disturbance in student's life,thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the- art technology,moderation and globalization. There is widespread worry that this would lead to a myriad of concerns.In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance.The most preponderant one is that in order to get relaxation,students life plays a crucial role in human life.Not only has the modern fast era brought a lot of opportunities all across the globe,but it has also provided various facilities to make our lives comfortable and convenient.Needless to say,all these merits stand people in good stead,when it comes to broadening their horizons.
Another pivotal aspect of this arguments is that in order to deal with this soaring people governments like effective steps,which are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable.Besides,awareness programs should be organised to make people aware about this issue.Last but not least,local councils and state authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favor of sports and games create disturbance in students life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies.
In view of the arguments outlined above,one can conclude that the potential benefits of sorts and games in student's life are indeed too great to ignore.
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also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58260869565 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8783096117 2.71678728327 143% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.5024630542 224% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.439650332 50.4703680194 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.8 104.977214359 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.9669160288 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241016667318 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116992112455 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873356958077 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131609050766 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671613552457 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 12.6369458128 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 53.1260098522 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.9458128079 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.3980295567 196% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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