Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Poor countries are often given assistance financial aid from developed countries but it does not really help in reducing poverty and therefore developed nations should think other kinds of solution with an alternative form of aid. From my point of view, I am in favor of this opinion. In this essay, I will give some reasons to support my idea.
We know that financial supports that are given to poor countries are not effective and efficient, therefore it is suggested that developed countries should help poor countries in others way. Firstly, it is a fact that illiteracy has become one of the major issues in poor countries, and developed countries could send some of their teachers to improve the education system there. It is hoped should the literacy rate increase, the number of unemployment will gradually decrease. Secondly, people of poor countries are suffered the low quality of the health system there so developed nations build more hospitals and improve the quality of the staff would be an effective way to help them. Finally, poor countries have bad transportation facilities. The developed countries can build more roads and provide some transportations that can help them go to the workplaces easier.
It can be seen that all of the alternative ideas are long term projects, and people can see the changes after ten or fifteen years minimum. Financial aid is not a long-lasting approach to tackling poverty. The poor countries are still needed help by financial aid from rich nations due to the government can not provide a good health and education system whereas many people are dying of starving and sick. However, the rich countries should have a plan before providing money to the poor countries to ensure the money can be used in the right way.
In conclusion, I would agree that financial aid is not the best way to solve the circumstance of the poor countries and the rich nations should have alternative solutions. However financial aid still gives a short period of time but it should be controlled.
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...wever financial aid still gives a short period of time but it should be controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97947214076 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7238176961 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4652466198 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371197024841 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129052512971 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866518824647 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240893259888 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03189757958 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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