You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express may dissatisfaction with poor customer service which you have in your bank.
I ordered a new cheque book on 12/12/2019. The order was done through bank website and I confirmed this via call centre service. It was two weeks ago and I have not yet received the cheque book. Base on information which you show on website this procedure takes around one week. I regret to inform you that my order is now considerably overdue.
I would like to know how much longer I will have to wait on the cheque book? I have to mention that it is serious problem for me because I do not have easy access to my money. I have to visit bank office every two days to get my money due to lack of cheque book.
Please let me know what action you propose to take to solve this issue.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I will have to wait on the cheque book? I have to mention that it is serious prob...
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Line 13, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I do not have easy access to my money. I have to visit bank office every two day...
^
Line 23, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43209876543 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34765998223 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2587287075 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.2727272727 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452299488893 0.216113520407 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151327645542 0.0766984524023 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753134686024 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203696101058 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825336840639 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.