We have entered a throw away society and fill the environment with rubbish what are the causes and what are your solutions?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in society throw away and environment full with rubbish thanks, to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology,moderation and globalization.There is a widespread worry that this would lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion,this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance.The most preponderant one is that in order to get relaxation,environment play crucial role in human life.Not only has the modern fast era brought a lot of opportunities all across the globe,but it has also provided various facilities to make our lives comfortable and convenient.Needless to say, all these merits stand people in good stead,when it comes to broadening their horizons.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that in order to deal with this soaring problem government like effective steps,which are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable.Besides,awareness programs should be organised to make people aware about this issue.Last but not least, local councils and state authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively.Hence,it is apparent why many are in favor of society throw away and the full environment with rubbish.
In view of the arguments outlined above,one can conclude that the potential benefits of we have entered a throw away society and fill the environment with rubbish are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51304347826 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.9926681387 2.71678728327 147% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.5024630542 224% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.268184464 50.4703680194 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.6 104.977214359 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.9669160288 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229945726195 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126880108133 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123129250291 0.071462118173 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153383870221 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118447756787 0.0609392437508 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 12.6369458128 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 53.1260098522 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.9458128079 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.3980295567 196% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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