A colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend. Write a latter to him/her.
In the letter you should:
Explain reason why you cannot attend
good memories you have spent
how you will stay in touch
Dear Sarah,
I have received your invitation to your goodbye party. I sincerely hope your event will be excellent and you and our colleagues spend the pleasant time.
I wish I could be with you that day but, unfortunately, I am going on a business trip in two days and will not able to attend this interesting event. Nonetheless, the time when we were a team was the best for me in this company and I really regret about your decision to leave our company. We spent many nights at work in an attempt to raise up paramount projects on a new level and, we definitely contributed to the development of our company. At the same time, I wish nothing but the best in your new workplace. I sincerely hope your new team will be very friendly, helpful and you will get on well with each other soon. Also, I would admit, that our occupation area is very close and we will inevitably cross again in the future, so we should continue to be in touch further.
The best of luck with all your endeavors. I will attach my contact details to this letter.
Best regards,
Helga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...colleagues spend the pleasant time. I wish I could be with you that day but, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nonetheless, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44502617801 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52504789848 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4217289173 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168409483772 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644976284047 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587162913307 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147049065742 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00596047413349 0.0580467560999 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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