The bar chart below shows the number of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult eduction centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
The presented graphs illustrate the number of people separated by sex gender that make evening courses such as drama, painting, sculpture and language in a centre of adult education and the proportion by age of these students during 2009. Overall, as seen in the pictograms the course most frequented by women is language classes instead of mens that prefer painting classes and the most common age of the participants is over 50 years.
In terms of courses by gender, it is notable that women have the major engagement representing a total of 95 students while men represent 30 person less. The courses more frequented by women and men are the same, language with 40 female students and 20 male students and painting with 30 female students and 25 male students. drama is a course frequented mostly by women too with exactly 20 women versus 10 men. The only course that have more men than women is sculpture where men represents the double of participants.
Considering the ages, people over 50 years are the major part of the students which rate is 42% followed by people between 40 and 49 years that represents 26 per cent. The least recurring age is under 20 with only 5% of all students. Lastly, students between 20-29 years are 11% and students between 30-39 represents 15% of all students
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- The bar chart below shows the number of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult eduction centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...l of 95 students while men represent 30 person less. The courses more frequented by wo...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Drama
...0 female students and 25 male students. drama is a course frequented mostly by women ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, so, while, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80357142857 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57116504106 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5677717741 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198256888447 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943452514783 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593658370077 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138222978916 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691961601741 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.