[TPO4] Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years, there will be fewer car in use than there are today. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, we can see crowded roads full of transportation systems with full of cars, trucks or motorcycles. Many serious traffic problems exist around the world. Some people said there will be no difference in the number of cars in the next twenty years. However, in my opinion, in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than these days. This is because for the environment and improvement in lifestyle.
To begin with, the solution needed for environmental problems. Destruction of the environment is one of the most serious challenges we face. Due to the deforestation and instruction of new buildings, there are fewer forests and jungles left which represents more serious environmental problems. If we keep these kind of status in twenty years, more severe pollution will exist that can negatively affect our life. To not facing more dangerous situation, the government will give out the solution for improving the pollution such as cut the number of cars and stop doing deforestation. The solution will be planned and be put into practice for protecting people and environments.
On top of that, people would rather stay in their house longer than go out. In twenty years, there will be much more improvement in various factors. There will be improvement in architecture and technology which makes comfortable living. Furthermore, the environmental pollution will become more serious than before, even though there will be some solutions. It is better to stay in our own house than encountering serious pollution. As people prefer to stay in the house than get out of their place, the number of cars on the road will be slowly decrease.
To sum up, in twenty years there will be fewer cars. The reason is that the solution needed for environmental pollution and improvement in home living. In this regard, there will be fewer cars on the road which don’t make more serious pollution and people will prefer to stay in the house due to environmental problems and development of living technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ious environmental problems. If we keep these kind of status in twenty years, more severe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0744047619 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86083590689 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470238095238 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6225630165 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231021380011 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802346813758 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707238964203 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160156508446 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033182959514 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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