Some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion
countries with warm weather are liked by many people due to the range or activities it offeres. However, this choice of prefereble climate varies people to people, because many, including myself would advocate for the winter sports and the lifestyle practiced in the cold climate instead. In this essay, I will discuss both views with relevant examples.
On the one hand, people who like to do outdoor activities under the warm sun and enjoy longer daylight usually prefers warm climate. In other words, man and women who like to go to the beach for different sea sports and feels comfortable not wearing many layers often consider to live in countries like Saoudi Arabia, Spain, australia etc. For instance, a recent survey by who has featured thatone third of the young immigrants in australia has chose their location due to the fact that they love the summer lifestyle australia offers.
On the other hand, some people feel more comfortable in cold climate. they enjoy the the activity comes with these type of climate, like ice skiing, mountain trekking, making snowman etc. usually, children and young generation who grew up watching films containing snows are more biased towards the cold climate. In addition to that, in many cases, people find living in high temperature cause uncomfortable feeling in their body, and a lot of energy is taken away as they sweat. For instance, an article on The Gurdian's latest issue has quoted that employers often enjoy working in Scandanevian countries and would never moved to other countries due to the mental contentment and relaxation they feel while at work.
To conclude, everyone has individual outlook regarding which activities and lifestyle would suit them. Although, each climate has pros and cons, I believe the culture and sportive practice of cold region would be more of my kind sience I feel more energetic during the winter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, third, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in many cases, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47392715775 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6241558141 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230875279199 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084551583907 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578798931462 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127925836326 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598202731725 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.