Rembrandt and his painting
In the set of material, in reading passage writer present three main reasons, why the painting was removed from the official catalogue of Rembrandt’s paintings in the 1930s. On the other hand, in lecture professor gives the evidence of resent research and oppose the writing section.
First, in reading section, writer states about the woman’s portrait dress. She is wearing a white linen cap, that only servants would wear yet also, coat wearing by woman has luxurious fur collar that servant couldn’t afford. Rembrandt has good knowledge about clothing; hence he couldn’t do that type of mistake. Instead of that in lecture professor state that the analyst of pigment and the result of X-ray prove that the painting is repainted after hundred year of original painting made. It is repainted for increase the basic value of painting.
Second, Rembrandt was a genius in light and shadow, but in painting face appears to be illuminated by light reflect onto it from below. But below the face is the dark fur collar, which would absorb light, rather reflect it. So the face appears partially in shadow- which is not how it appears. In other hand, professor state the reason of that appears. From his point of view the woman wearing a light color cloths and the colors of cloths are reflect on the face. So the face of woman is not in the shadow.
Finally, in reading section, it is observe that back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a several pieces of wood glued together. None of the painting of Rembrandt paint on several pieces of wood glued together. He painted a painting on a single piece of wood glued. In lecture professor state that when fur collar is added, the wood panel is also enlarge. So the several pieces of wood is added on the top side of painting. Professor also state that the original painting is painted on single piece of wood. These pieces of wood are added in painting for making painting more grand and valuable.
In the end it is clear that the original painting is made by Rembrandt, and these painting is repainted and modify for increase his value and for making more grand and valuable. After the research the painting was added official catalogue of Rembrandt’s painting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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In the set of material, in reading passa...
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...earch and oppose the writing section. First, in reading section, writer states...
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...ve that the painting is repainted after hundred year of original painting made. It is r...
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...increase the basic value of painting. Second, Rembrandt was a genius in light ...
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...lor cloths and the colors of cloths are reflect on the face. So the face of woman is no...
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...e face of woman is not in the shadow. Finally, in reading section, it is obser...
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...collar is added, the wood panel is also enlarge. So the several pieces of wood is added...
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...ing painting more grand and valuable. In the end it is clear that the original...
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...catalogue of Rembrandt's painting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 30.3222958057 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 385.0 270.72406181 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86233766234 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53695107607 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.540411800872 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 2.5761589404 466% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9200237916 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04545454545 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.27373068433 304% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384332650842 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115099424928 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122789457451 0.0662205650399 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226304123237 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120760513456 0.0443174109184 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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