TPO 6 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world technology made our lives easy and comfortable. We can access any information from the world within a minutes. Technology made our commute faster and comfortable. Some people would belives that today's life is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children, others would disagree. In my view, today's life is easier than before for many reasons.
First of all, Because of good transportation, our work has done much faster than before. Many flights, trains, subways and most of the people own a car this facility made our life easier and we can finish our work fast. For example, My brother owns spices business, he does business with many countries and he has to travel very often. Most of the time he takes flight to travel the USA, UK, France, even though this country is far from our home country India, his work done in two to three days it is because he takes flights. He doesn't have to waste his time on long hectic transportation. I remember my grandfather was doing business in there a time he uses to stay out of home for a couple of months because at that time we didn't have good transportation services. This example clearly explains that today's life is much easier and comfortable because of the advanced transportation system.
Second, we can access any information from the internet and we can do our work. There is much information available on the internet regarding which medication to use when you have a cough, knowledge about how to fix a car, how to fix a cell phone, etc. This infrmation is helpful to finish our work. For instance, my sister had stomach pain in the middle of the night. I did try to contact the doctor's office but everything was closed. So I started to research online regarding stomach pain and I found plenty of information which was very helpful. I gave stomach pain medication and she was feeling better, she was able to sleep in the night. It was possible due to technology. This example clearly explains that the internet made our lives easier and we can do our work.
In sum, though some may not agree, life today is easier and comfortable. Not only today we can do our work faster but also we can excess many information, which made our lives more luxurious. I strongly believe that today's life is much easier and comfortable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a minute' or simply 'minutes'?
Suggestion: a minute; minutes
...s any information from the world within a minutes. Technology made our commute faster and...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ortable. Some people would belives that todays life is easier and more comfortable tha...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...days it is because he takes flights. He doesnt have to waste his time on long hectic t...
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Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ouple of months because at that time we didnt have good transportation services. This...
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Line 5, column 805, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ces. This example clearly explains that todays life is much easier and comfortable bec...
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Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
... of the night. I did try to contact the doctors office but everything was closed. So I ...
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Line 13, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... our work faster but also we can excess many information, which made our lives more ...
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Line 13, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
... our work faster but also we can excess many information, which made our lives more luxurious. I...
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Line 13, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...more luxurious. I strongly believe that todays life is much easier and comfortable. ...
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Line 13, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys life is much easier and comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70660146699 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61528217648 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462102689487 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.276865226 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2083333333 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164919449834 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553773064672 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654396075541 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122902163687 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052667784376 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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