Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career While others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today's era, focusing on Career, family and Friends are very difficult. Some people says that for successful career a person should spend more time in it, where others say that family and friends are more important so, in this essay I will discuss and share my opinion.
Nowadays, every person whether it is a kid or a mature person thinks about money, they want to become successful and for that they keep on spending time on new strategies and plans. To begin with, firstly, everyone wants to be independent and they keep on making plans or study to make it successful. Secondly, a person with handsome salary can fulfill their dreams along with your family hence, they can live luxurious life. Third and lastly if a person serves Nation, eventually it gives more pride and relishment.
On the other hand, money can not only help in buying everything like, happiness cannot be purchased so, it is much to spend time with family and friends because they are the life support and backbones of each other. In case of any detrimental situation this stood like o and iron Shield and protect us from deleterious things. Although they are not helpful in every situation but spending time with them helps to rejuvenate the person mind. Moreover, many good lessons of the life can be learned from them and they are a best tutor, mentor for life because they help us to overcome from difficulties before it becomes more aggravated.
By concluding this, no doubt, in this tough competition everyone wants to earn money and have successful career but a true happiness in life is only because of friends and family
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 520, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81003584229 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43549903598 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6321989989 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272562446381 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999958113534 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997105032028 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168129293325 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109916962124 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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