A friend you made while you are studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in your local country. You have about a job in your local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. in your letter
1. tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
2. say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
3. explain how to apply for job
Dear James,
I am delighted receive a letter from you and excited to know that you're interested to work in my country. I'm writing this in reply of your letter; a private company in my city has a vacancy available that will suit you the best.
Let me explain you in detail, 'afroze textile' has recently advertised that they are looking for a chartered accountant for senior position in their company. The main job responsibilites include but not limited to: preperation of budget, design project feasibility report, reducing budget deficit, etc.
The company is looking for someone who have at least 3 years of experience at manegarial position, whereas, you have over 5 years of experience. Not only this, but also this position needs a good communication skills and as a native english speaker you have a competitive advantage over other to deal with the deligates better.
please make an online account on www.seek.com and search for 'afroze textile', click on the advertise, then upload your resume and cover letter there. please allow them at least 2 weeks to answer, they might will conduct a phone interview with you.
I wish you best of luck and can't wait to see you soon.
yours faithfully,
Yasir Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, I am delighted receive a letter from you...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...etter from you and excited to know that youre interested to work in my country. Im wr...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...youre interested to work in my country. Im writing this in reply of your letter; a...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty report, reducing budget deficit, etc. The company is looking for someone who h...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...r to deal with the deligates better. please make an online account on www.seek.com ...
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Line 11, column 87, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...and search for afroze textile, click on the advertise, then upload your resume and cover lett...
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Line 11, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...oad your resume and cover letter there. please allow them at least 2 weeks to answer, ...
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Line 13, column 29, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ith you. I wish you best of luck and cant wait to see you soon. yours faithful...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... luck and cant wait to see you soon. yours faithfully, Yasir Khan
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Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it to see you soon. yours faithfully, Yasir Khan
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, whereas, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96116504854 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67952810479 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699029126214 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5130317997 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336348039927 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120909577841 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489863506203 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16727056801 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391074270485 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.