Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The government is the authority body of the nation. Most of nation appllied for democracy system, Where people elect the person to run and represent them. Government has many department, some department are undervery important like education, home mininstry, finance, military and some are less important like art, archaeology and many more. Government decide or allocate the money to the important department. This allocation of money based on an simple question, "how much people are going to impact by this department depatments? "
by considering the answer the government spen or infused money into the department.
The government priority not change along time, they want to deliver equal focus to every important department. In meanwhile they sometimes not able to provide a sufficient amount money to rest of the department.That effect the department in very bad way. Like art department, though it's goverment's responsibility to preserve art and regional collection or to promote it. But sometimes goverment failed to do that. To fight with is problem indian government establish a committee which act like the bridge between this kind of department. And it went very well, after this rest of department getting minimum funds. Although funds are not that much lucrative but it's sufficient to handl departmental activity.
Moreover, lack of interest is also issue in this problem. Due to urbnization of the country, people slowly become not interested in the art work, which leads to unemployement in this ecosystem. And citizens related to art work moving towards other alternative, which solve their employment problmes. To solve this issue the government must promote art exihibitions and some public awarness will solve this problem.
In conclusion: Although government has many department where government need to focus but government should focus on other departments which are less impactfull but necessery to make distinct from the rest of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun department seems to be countable; consider using: 'many departments'.
Suggestion: many departments
... run and represent them. Government has many department, some department are undervery importan...
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Line 1, column 446, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ment. This allocation of money based on an simple question, 'how much people ...
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Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... based on an simple question, 'how much people are going to impact by this depa...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
... The government priority not change along time, they want to deliver equal focus to ev...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
... amount money to rest of the department.That effect the department in very bad way. ...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts goverments responsibility to preserve art and regional collection or to promot...
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Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'issued'.
Suggestion: issued
... Moreover, lack of interest is also issue in this problem. Due to urbnization of ...
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Line 15, column 40, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun department seems to be countable; consider using: 'many departments'.
Suggestion: many departments
... In conclusion: Although government has many department where government need to focus but gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5016286645 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95622301728 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7312570081 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212770985804 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636467625871 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378748753407 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111537083825 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333011942234 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.