Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
There are two main classifications of the diet forms:-the vegetarian and the nonvegetarian. Some people argue that everyone should adapt to the vegetarian culture as it brings more benefits to our health. Before rendering my opinion, I, think it's important to take a glance on both the views.
To begin with, proteins are the building blocks of our bodies. Proteins are mainly found in nonvegetarian items and meat is the complete source of all the amino acids required by our body, including the one which our body cannot produce. Some people argue that even plant-based foods such as pulses, legumes and green leafy vegetables have protiens. But one must remember that the protein content of these food is less as compared to red meat. Also, animal-based products like eggs, chicken and fish are rich in vitamins, particularly Vitamin B complex. Vitamin B is necessary for proper functioning of the neurological system. Vitamin B is rarely found in plants.
Secondly, some people might argue that the regular consumption of meat can pose serious health problems like cancer or foodbrone dieases This statement is fallicious as by proper cooking and heating of meat all the bacterias get killed. Moreover, foodbrone illness can also be caused by unhygienic practices in food production and harvesting. And, people with vegetarian diet often have health issues such as deficiency of vitamins resulting in radiculopathies.
To conclude, I strongly disagree with the statement that everyone should become vegetarian in order to stay healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...st remember that the protein content of these food is less as compared to red meat. Also, ...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e protein content of these food is less as compared to red meat. Also, animal-base...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35772357724 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89088417548 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6065270895 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158848632041 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467922554647 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476183140812 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104417560599 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425006127124 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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