Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Historically the arts and culture have played the unique role in the society - it enriches our understanding of our lives, expands our thinking and tells our stories in the creative manner. Since our earliest days, the arts depicted our lives, reflecting the historical period - classical greek art changed rapidly as Greece went through wars and imperial transformations. And, of course, to save the historical pieces there should had been funding that mainly was coming from the private patrons. Has it changed since then? The statement above presents two conflicting presentations of the same true fact: it is unquestionable that government funding can either ensure that the arts can elucidate or endanger the arts’ integrity. The numerous examples from the past convey the appearance that both opinions to the certain extent are likely to be true. However, while there is certainly a correlation, there is no causation between government funding and arts’ integrity. In my humble opinion, for arts, not to be affected by the outrageous influence due to the subsidies, it would be preferred to search for unbiased investors, like philanthropies and voluntary means that encourage art to be free from any altering values.
The first view, that the government funding is “bread and butter” of the arts to ensure that they can flourish, can be clearly examined through the examples from the russian arts. Indeed, recently “The Balkan Line” film was announced, subsidized by the Russian Ministry of Culture. Indeed, the public money amplified the viral marketing campaign - hence the film was provided to the wider audience. Whereas in a number of developing countries, the assumption holds true, on the other side of the coin there is the great deal of countries, replete with reverse examples. Consider the operations of the Royal Opera House and La Skala in Italy at various times, it seems that as the extent of public funds rises, the costs rise as well. Evidence suggests that subsidies do, indeed, increase costs rather than supply of the arts.
At a more fundamental level, however, there is the assumption that the government funds put in peril the arts’ integrity. It is not so clear, as it is highly related to the nature of the art piece and artist’s viewpoint. What, first of all, can we mean by the idea of the “arts’ integrity”? If we think of it in the terms, universally shared by all human beings, then the integrity genuinely means the ability to omit an acceptable level of disrupting and opposing values that would otherwise alter the artist’s original vision. It is worth considering that the public funds, subsidizing the arts, should have the benign effect on the society, hence it should not appear too blatant. For example, artworks, depicting the raffish and lascivious scenes, are in the state of flux, as it is hardly being argued whether they bring any benefits at all. At its pinnacle, I would say that the appearance gets the relation backwards and it relies on the narrow-minded view of that there is no other sources of funding, but the public funds.
Just as we find difficult to definitely declare the linear causation between the arts’ integrity and public funds, so we should elucidate the other sources of funding opportunities. Those subsidies can come from private funds, corporate sponsorship, the sale of tickets and the National Lottery. When the government is not the paymaster, the key relationships are between the providers of the arts, those attending performances and those giving voluntary donations. Accountability is strong. The apex of the issue rests on the fast - the provision of culture is always intrinsically linked to the source of the funding. For example, if the private funding is involved, the art will be highly depended on the community viewpoint. And according to the same logic, government funding will encourage art to exist for the sake of bureaucratic values. No the other way around.
In the end, the statements present two partly true facts that have different implication. While often this is how things may look on the surface, in reality any kind of funding can shape the artist’s viewpoint. In any case, the artist has freedom to choose and can always make an attempt to find like-minded people. No doubt, funds flow can help art to flourish, one should always bear in mind that it is highly depended on the distributor policy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, kind of, no doubt, of course, first of all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3766.0 2235.4752809 168% => OK
No of words: 729.0 442.535393258 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16598079561 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.19615242271 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90094055677 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 363.0 215.323595506 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497942386831 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1147.5 704.065955056 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.995561495 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.121212121 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314759145395 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768398730093 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771748473073 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18269160371 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443362468814 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 188.0 100.480337079 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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