Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain an important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
Online newspaper, Facebook and emails are everyday communication tools, although nowadays, reading news on the Internet appears to gain popularity while newspaper are used less frequently. The fears that attractiveness of traditional newspaper will be attached with less importance are rooted mainly in the concern that the growing widespread of Internet is about to make obtaining news more popular. Such worries are unsupported.
A majority of daily information involve written correspondence, whether it takes the form of online or offline. As different from reading news online, reading in writing requires a large number of techniques. The prevalence of emails and social media will not change the purposes, contents and conventions of information, but merely medium, font or sentence length. For example, successful written delivery of news are normally measured by clarity and accuracy, two elements that remain unchanged despite the upsurge in the use of Internet.
Another fact to note is that all information is interpersonal and interactive, thereby requiring information reporters to use language properly and convey messages clearly and precisely. In order to become a successful writer, one should plan, tailor, and devise his or her own writing according to the reader. Composing an article without the intended viewer will increase the possibility of poor understanding or even misunderstanding. Getting the right tone is therefore a crucial merit of old-style newspaper that is likely to influence the success of communication.
The examples that are outlined above have apparently overturned the prevailing notion that newspaper will vanish sooner or later as a result of the increased use of Internet and Facebook. Written communication requires a good knowledge of the rules of language, such as grammar, vocabulary and tone. Without a good command of those writing skills, a communicator will encounter many awkward situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ews online, reading in writing requires a large number of techniques. The prevalence of emails an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69047619048 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14574182189 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0243098225 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238618727896 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637474389138 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665843337175 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128809404628 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822991032882 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.