Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Every person undergoes trials and tribulations in life and when such difficult situations present themselves, they often wonder as to what is the best path ahead? Would accepting the given circumstance bring them peace or should they march to fight a battle to attain glory? In this essay I will discuss both these views.
Life is unpredictable and people face unpleasant circumstances at various junctures like unhappy relationships or being stuck in jobs that either aren’t professionally satisfying or do not pay the market rate. Such adverse situations dishearten people and they begin to question their destiny. Some feel that acceptance is the path to peace. They feel that they need to accept what life has thrown towards them, as there is no assurance of happiness or success in whatever they may try to change. They fear that they might get themselves into worse situations. An example would be an undereducated guy continuing to work in a dead-end job as he feels there is nothing he can do about it.
On the contrary, there are others who are thrilled by challenges. They work to decipher the source of the problem and are willing to take steps to change the status quo. They believe that they can persevere and write their own destiny. My friend is such a person. She would study overnight while continuing to work a day job so that she could get into a better career and life.
In my opinion, acceptance is just the first step. I completely believe in the proverb- When life throws lemons, make lemonade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, while, as to, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88122605364 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72064106733 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.049719673 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174161183486 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585993358428 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321679703554 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10065995243 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154744196539 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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