In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The argument state that it is no longer possible to regard any living man or woman as a hero because the intensive media coverage. Although there are lots of figures once we thought as hero was exposed by the modern media, there are more hero, famous or unknown before the time, have been introduce to the public and hold up to their reputation they over time. As far as I'm concern, there is no reason to believe that it is impossible to regard any living person as a hero and, in fact, the new media has made more unsung hero to beable to be introduced to the public than ever before.
It common to believe that as the time goes by, any person, although he/she once was consider as a hero, would not lived up to their reputation. Although it is true for some people, there are true heros who have endured the test of time. The best example being the Captain "Sully" who landed the airplane safely on the Hudison river after the bird strike. After decades later, People found that he did not overwhelmed by the fame and reputation he received from the accident and continue pilot the airplane without any accidents until retirement. He is a true hero, who lives up to his reputation. In fact, there are more people who have already been widely known by the world, yet decide to live as a normal people and be the true hero of our time.
What is more, the intensive media coverage makes more unsang heros become known to the public. They may not have save hunders of lives like Captain "Sully" did, but they have become hero by preform their duty everyday and no one even realize how much they have sacrificed for the well-being of the society, such as power engineers who work on the power transimission line. they usually works at hundered feet above the ground every day just to make sure that the city can recieve electricity without interruption. The media coverage provides people with oppotunity to learn about their heroic act.
It is most importantly, the intense media coverage allows people to re-think the definishion of a hero. Brave man and woman who preforme heroic act all their live does exist, but the heroic behavior are far more common. With the media coverage, now we will know something like the teacher who saved their student during the earthquake, or a random joe who convence people not to conduct suciede. Some people may think these behavior doesn't means that they are hero, but, in my point of view, they are as much a hero as others because they can inspire more people to be kind.
In summary, the intensive media converage does not make it impossible to regard any living man or woman as a hero. In fact, the new media provides us with more means to learn about the heroic act people have done everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'unknowns'?
Suggestion: unknowns
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'overwhelm'
Suggestion: overwhelm
...des later, People found that he did not overwhelmed by the fame and reputation he received ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, in fact, in summary, such as, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62880324544 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39170523697 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478701825558 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 759.6 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7647621958 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.105263158 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9473684211 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187903269633 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771416847412 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082614501618 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129306385384 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605735336297 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.