You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR, and supervisor to
Explain the reason why you decline the offer
Express your gratitude
Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to convey my gratitude for offering me the role of Recruitment Manager based in Dubai, UAE in your prestigious organization
I must say that the subject role looks very interesting and challenging to me as the incumbent will report directly to the Director of Talent Management in the corporate office, and would have a team of total five senior and junior recruiters to look after the entire Middle East region. This exciting role will play a significant role for an individual to develop team management skills and up light the career ladder.
However, I would like to decline your offer at this juncture because I have recently been given another exciting assignment where I would be responsible to travel various countries to arrange recruitment trips and fill the vacant spots. I presume this new role will enhance my broader perspective of the recruitment domain, and give me the opportunity to lead front the front while traveling to west and north America.
Thank you for considering my profile for the available role, and I look forward to working with you in the near future.
Best Regards,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-06 | sohailahmad | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05208333333 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74074654488 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.789883479 44.8134815571 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.0 76.5299724578 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.4 16.8248392259 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12858384822 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055930380069 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584757666278 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872355582262 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526497460466 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 8.37731958763 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 7.45979381443 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.