You recently bought some food at the supermarket, but, when you go home , you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter,
explain what happened to you , give details of the day and time of purchase.
ask the manager he/she intends to do about your experience.
Dear Sir,
My name is Alex, a regular customer to buy grocery items from your superstore which is located in the Canal Garden society.
I am writing this letter to convey my disappointment with my recent experience to buy a couple of grocery items including milk and eggs. I went to your store on Friday 25th December, 20219, and bought milk and eggs from there to have breakfast together with kith and kin the next day in the morning as they were in the town to visit historical monuments. However, when we were about to prepare the breakfast next morning, we got to know that both the items have already expired, and the expiring stamps were posted very clearly which I didn’t notice then. Due to this, it creates a panic situation in my house because my guests were waiting for their break to finish, so they could go out, and I had no option except to give an online order for ready-made breakfast to avoid any further delay.
I was very much annoyed because of the negligence of your staff to keep expired items for sale, and I am interesting to know what actions you will take from your side to avoid this situation in the future, so loyal customers like me won’t suffer at all.
I hope you look into this matter on an urgent basis.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Alex, a regular customer to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62008733624 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37446192841 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.248100282 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.142857143 76.5299724578 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7142857143 16.8248392259 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120316703879 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486991551612 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419611565504 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762258695185 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399970798503 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 8.37731958763 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.