Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
I know many people who would claim that internet gives people acsses to too much information which creates problems. However, I am in the idea that internet is a very handy tool from which you can get truly valuable information. I think this way for several of reasons.
First of all, I can not imagine myself to do my day to day stuff without using internet. Information ate web espationly helps me at work. For example as i work as a programmer I face some kind of problems everyday, whithout internet I would stuck on them for very long hours, but know I can easily find the solution of my problem online.
Second reason being are online libraries. There are a lot of online books and jurnals which are publicly avaliable online. Many students and professionals are using them now insted of going to library. It is much more conviniante and time saving. When I was a student a few years ago I used a lot of online books to study for my exams.
Last but not least are movies and music. Many people ecluding mself are listening to music or watching TV shows while I warking or if they want to relax. And they can choose what they want to leastn or watch from internet. About 20-30 years ago no one can do that. For example I like watching Netflix at night, which is internet based movie sharing network.
Whereby, I think that internet provides very valuable information for everyone and can only be benefitiole. I do not see any problems that may acure because of information.
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- Integrated 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...programmer I face some kind of problems everyday, whithout internet I would stuck on the...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...ems everyday, whithout internet I would stuck on them for very long hours, but know I...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
... stuck on them for very long hours, but know I can easily find the solution of my pr...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ks to study for my exams. Last but not least are movies and music. Many people eclud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60447761194 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50744880504 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.010642739 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5555555556 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193765812806 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547691111652 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543520985658 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114344704247 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764488048307 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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