The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States(1999).
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the number of employees from the French,Italy, Germany, British and other countries in the United States in 1999.
Overall, the most highest number of employees from the British (approximately 28000),while that time the smallest number of employees working from the French in United States in 1999.
The number of EU-Born science and technology employees working from Germany in United States.(about 25000 of employees).This is not only highest amount of employees ,but also better result than the French,Italy and other countries.The 20000 of the employees working in the United States from the other countries in 1999.The number of Italians workers better than French, but worse than other countries.(approximately 8000 workers). The number of EU-Born science and technology employees of French triple less than the Germans workers and the number of British employees approximately more than 3000 than the Germany.(approximately 4000 and 28000 of workers)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
... the number of employees from the French,Italy, Germany, British and other countries i...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...e United States in 1999. Overall, the most highest number of employees from the British ap...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the highest'.
Suggestion: most the highest
...e United States in 1999. Overall, the most highest number of employees from the British ap...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... United States.about 25000 of employees.This is not only highest amount of employees...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... is not only highest amount of employees ,but also better result than the French,I...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
... ,but also better result than the French,Italy and other countries.The 20000 of the em...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...an the French,Italy and other countries.The 20000 of the employees working in the U...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...States from the other countries in 1999.The number of Italians workers better than ...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r countries.approximately 8000 workers. The number of EU-Born science and technolog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39309199058 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 106.607317073 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43537414966 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.583678723 43.030603864 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.25 112.824112599 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.75 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221777177162 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183512336126 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799209060934 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217029241458 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600038460692 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.2329268293 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 61.2550243902 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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