Now a day food has become easier to prepare. This change improved the way people live ? Use reason and example to support your answer ?

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Now a day food has become easier to prepare. This change improved the way people live ? Use reason and example to support your answer ?

it is a fact that, advancement of technology many household chores have become quite easy and enjoyable. They want to do it easily with the help of modern tools. According to me improvement is definitely enhance our lifestyle. In fact , it is more positive than disadvantages.

Discussing the reason the most common one is that process of cooking become genderless and quicker. Also, as per a survey more men enjoy cooking in the recent year. This is because advance mordent tools. For example, microwave, oven, a food processor and coffee maker done half their work. Moreover, food is easy to prepared. people not only enjoy more cuisine than past but also Experiment their culinary skills.

Furthermore, people get more time together with family and friends. Also pre-cooked, half-cooked and half-prepared food available. More home cooking is happening and less efforts are required, which is time saving.

The mention reason have some impact too. However, easy food preparation is made people lazier and some health issues such as obesity, digestive problem and cancer. In addition, they using juice instead of fruit to intakes insufficient vitamins and minerals. which people cause many health problem.

Thus, from the light of above discussion , it can be said that there are few negative impact on the way people live. I prefer to prepare tasty food in easy method using latest technology.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20353982301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66842624312 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66814159292 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9794293225 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8947368421 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8947368421 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163926648029 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440482109854 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292528089579 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847041380754 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381617915368 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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