With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting many animal species are becoming endangered and sone are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?
There is no doubt that harmful activitiea of humankind such as loggong, poaching and urbanizilationhave put many animal species at severe risk and many of them are in danger of dying out. I personally think all the sentient being have right to live. I will propse some measures could be done to alleviate this issue.
Firtsly, because forests have been fellen in large numbers for many years lots of animal's nests are taken away from them. For instance, squerrals and unique birds have struggling to find a peaceful place to live after their homes destroyed. Moreover, instead of saving endangered species of animals such polar bears, elephants, pandas some people keep hunting them illegally. It is clear that, polar bears are hunted for their glamourus furs, elephants for their priceless ivory. People who staying behind these activities have been profiting financially.
Turning to possible solutions for ceasing deforestation could be imposing high amount of fine for criminals and even imprisoning as long as the law brakers have re-offend. As a result many more forest inhibitants will be saved. Secondly, illegal hunters should be arrested so that the rare animals can live in peace. Eventually endangered species could be rescued from inevitable threat of extinction and boost their number. As a precaution some reserves need to be opened in order to create a safe environment for animals under of threat. This will enable them to breed quickly.
To conclude, my feelinf is that as we are human beings it would be morally wrong to take away homes of animals paving the way for them to die.
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- Many governments think economic progress is their important goal. Some people however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Extreme sports such as ski diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do tou agree or disagree with this view? 56
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opini 84
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achivements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...long as the law brakers have re-offend. As a result many more forest inhibitants w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09811320755 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64921786318 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0719693546 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193092798844 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066818166813 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404855647116 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122196271597 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038347134799 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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