What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reason and example to support your choice.
The significant expertness of person to point to success in the world have a lot of things that depend on life style of each person and characteristic work. In my views, i think that the communication skill is more important to success in the world, and I have the 2 reasons for support my viewpoint: to contact with others, to support for business.
To begin with, the communication skill help to easily contact with others. For example, when I was 20 years old. I planed to study Master Degree which was the Electronics Engineering filed in the United State of America; however my english language was not enough communication with the staff of Electronics major, so some accents and sentences were not clear and correct. As a result, the staff could not understand me, and sending back the documents were wrong. Form the this reason, I can conclude that the communicative skill is the most important thing to success in the future.
Without a doubt, after the graduated from the university or college, almost people would like to work in the high salary or more wages. Actually, if we would like to get the high salary or was support to promote to boss, we need communicate in our team to successful business. For instance, after the graduated in the electronic engineering in KMITL university of Thailand. I begin to first job in the sale engineering. Exactly, I was not enough experience communication with customers, so the first time to communicate was fail and bad business. Later 1 month, i try to read more books which were skill to communicate with customer technic. After understanding technic communication, i can sell many products of my company.
All in all, the communication skill is the best skill for success in the world. we can use this skill to many tasks such as to contact with others and to use for business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82389937107 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87821755743 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503144654088 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8376828416 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168932092225 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061430316708 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742821198097 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137205481877 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784980681954 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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