The pie chart shows which weight range of the adult population
The pie chart shows which weight range of the adult population 2015, while the bar chart demonstrates the percentage of adult who are overweight or obese between 1965 and 2015. Overall we can see that who were obese and overweight are the highest ratio and the proportion of adult who are overweight and obese rose during this period.
The pie chart depicts us that severely obese is less than all the others, at 6%. There are healthy or underweight at 29% and overweight at 31%. obese, on the other hand have a third which is the highest ratio of the adult population 2015.
The bar chart illustrates that the percentage of adult who are overweight or obese between 1965 and 2015. The proportion around 50% before increasing to 60% in 1995. The statistics goes up from 60% to 70% in 2005 and grows slightly from 70% to 75% in 2015. In general, the percentage rises from 45% to 75% over the period.
To sum up, it is eviden that total of adults who are overweight rose over 50 years and obese was significant proportion in 2015.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obese
...derweight at 29% and overweight at 31%. obese, on the other hand have a third which i...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d 50% before increasing to 60% in 1995. The statistics goes up from 60% to 70% in 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in general, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46311675635 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3332753623 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276447237126 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107998708377 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163815950294 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162266302731 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128274319601 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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