Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in correct place.
What is your opinion about this.
Keep clean and tidy is a significant evidence of civilization. People claim that we should always tidy up and arrange things in order either at home or office. Although this may be time-consuming and boring, but I believe such comfortable living environment may increase work efficiency and lead to a quality life.
On the one hand, an organized home or office can help people stay calm and work with high efficiency which match the fast pace of life today. It is true that no one want to indulge themself in a place where everything is scattered around because it has been proved by psychologist that people may feel uneasy and furious in such condition. Meanwhile, if our files and stationary is disorganized in our workplace, we cannot find the right files in first time,resulting in low efficiency in our work,which will eventually cause a poor quality of job performance.
On the other hand, some people claim that it is not cost-effective to clean and tidy in places because we can make use of valuable time to do more productive and meaningful things instead; however,in my point of view , I think it would be understandable.People may feel exhaust after work when they back home, they barely have time or energy to do the housework but relax or do exercise; meanwhile, at workplace, the time is more precious and clerks should focus on the work itself . but it is not mean that the clean and tidy is not important, in fact, they choosing hire nanny or using the automatic machines to do the chores and get things done.
To conclude, it is undeniable that a clean and tidy home and a organized workplace can bring huge benefit to us, I also believe that use the latest technology to do so can make magnificent change to our life and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, i think, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73941368078 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90310202757 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.119820072 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102043063423 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445405495657 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299365277977 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632706858189 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116949128299 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.