in many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern world changes are inevitable to the society. Villages are transformed into small towns as well as further to cities. Development planners plan the shops, schools, offices and housing in designated areas as to support the balance of the society which brings numerous advantages for the people.
To begin, establishment of cities are well planned by the authorities to avoid possible anomalies. As the cities are overcrowded these days a proper design is required to divide each sectors equally to meet the needs of the people. To show, schools and educational institutions must be built in a designated places especially near to housing areas in order to provide feasibility for the students and workers to get access to the facilities. These will bring further development such as small shops, heath care centers and many more.
Furthermore, cities are the places which provide shopping and other amenities for the civilians to access for their requirement. An improper planning could cause series of events such as traffic congestions, pollutions, scarcity in natural resources like water. Each and every area must be designated for special purpose. For example, if an area is elected for a shopping mall in the core region of city must have a proper blue print and it must be built according to that to avoid the possible issues.
However, these development are disadvantageous for the village people as it would cause inconvenience for them as they have to travel more for education, shopping and other purposes.
In conclusion, it is obvious that a city must be planned properly for the benefit of the society. Construction of shops, schools, offices and other necessities in designated areas will maintain the balance of living and provides easy approach for people to those facilities.
In conclusion, it is obvious that a city must be planned properly for the benefit of the society. Construction of shops, schools, offices and other necessities in designated areas will keep up the balance of living and provides easy approach for people to those facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uthorities to avoid possible anomalies. As the cities are overcrowded these days a...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...void the possible issues. However, these development are disadvantageous for the village peo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...education, shopping and other purposes. In conclusion, it is obvious that a city...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8788061669 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452662721893 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4519493804 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118021901934 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044483201125 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444738581883 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779558798966 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274066573757 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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